提升托福写作能力 需要的不仅仅是思路
托福写作其实就是一个积累的过程,积累中不断的借鉴别人的经验,取其精华而为我所用,当然这个借鉴需要掌握一个度,灵活运用,才能使自己的文章锦上添花。而对于托福写作来说需要不仅仅是思路那么简单,更多的需要什么呢?下面是学习啦小编给大家带来的提升托福写作能力需要的不仅仅是思路,供大家参考!
提升托福写作能力 需要的不仅仅是思路
其实我们在讨论托福作文的时候,是有一个很有趣的参照点的,这个参照点就是GRE考试。小编认为:对于本科生来说,出国留学必然是要在gre与gmat考试中间选一个的。而且很多的考友都是选择先考GRE考试,然后再考托福考试,这里就出现了一个超有趣的现象,就是我们会发现很多考友可以在GRE考试当中拿到4分的成绩,但是在托福考试的作文之中也尽然只有20分。
本来在GRE考试里只有66.66%的正确率,然后再托福考试里也只有66.66%的正确率,按说没什么问题啊。但如果仔细一想的话,就会发现,托福考试本身就是以考察思想深度而出名的,如果在这个考试里思想深度还好的话,那么这些思路回到托福考试里,岂不是通杀!但是很遗憾,这里的作文分数也尽然只有20分,到这里,其实就该引起了各位考友的疑问,到底为什么回到托福作文里也只有20分呢?
难道这2个考试都一样吗?而且更夸张的是,有的考友竟然考了4.5,甚至5分,但是最后的托福作文也还是在20上下,这就更说不通了,因为在已经搞定了GRE的情况下,托福作文绝对应该是小菜一碟啊。
小编认为,之所以会出现这样的情况,很大程度上就是因为评分标准的不同,当然,我们今天只关心托福作文,GRE作文还是交给其他人来解读吧。换句话说,上面一个很小的例子其实就能告诉我们,托福写作考试对于基础语言的要求是很类似的,也就是说,本身对我们的要求就是没有语法错误,同时段落清晰,结构明了。
但是,这仅仅是最为初级的要求,我们集合可以在国内任何一个留学论坛上都能找到相关的内容,但是十分讽刺的是,我们中国学生作文的平均分,也尽然只有20分上下,换句话说,在每一个人都知道真理的时候,如果我们都做不到的话,那么要么是真理是假话,要么是真理太难了。但是,我们一想就会知道,其实只要我们写过3-5篇文章,那么逻辑就不会太差,但是我们的分数仍然只有20分左右的平均分,那么结果只能有一点,就是我们平时信奉的托福作文,思路之上的这条真理是错误的!没有别的原因。
当然,也许我们会说,也许这是Chinglish的问题,可以说从很浅层的角度来看,是这样的。但是如果深入研究,我们的结论就不是那么肯定了。因为Chinglish往往被我们理解为语法错误,比如说Good,Good,Study,Day,Day,UP。亦或者是everythings are just too prefects.不过这句很时髦的中式英语,最被人嘲笑的就是everything后面被加了复数。
但是很多时候,我们把那个没有发现,自己的错误在于后面的too其实用的很不恰当,因为too很多时候就表示“过头了,过分了”。
这里最好写为soprefect,亦或者是bloodyprefect,前者显得很正式,后者则显得很local,很有黑人范。换句话说,everythings是最为常见的Chinglish,too prefects,则是很隐性的Chinglish,但是在20分上下的作文里很常见。soprefect则是在26分以下的作文里很常见。bloodyprefect则是在29分作文里很常见。
托福写作中的经典套句
为了帮助大家更好的备考托福,学习啦小编给大家带来“托福写作中的经典套句介绍”,以下是详细内容,希望能够对同学们有所帮助!
托福作文开头套句:
When it comes to..., some think...
There is a public debate today that...
A is a common way of..., but is it a wise one?
Recently the problem has been broughtsintosfocus.
提出观点:
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
进一步提出观点:
...but that is the only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is...
Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
举普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remark of ...
"...". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"...". How often we hear such words like there.
讲故事(先说故事主体),this story is not rare
..., such dilemma we often meet in daily life
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for...
Why ..., for one thing,...
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
The first reason can be obliviously seen.
Most people would agree that...
Some people may neglect that in fact ...
Others suggest that...
Part of the explanation is ...
进行对比:
The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...
Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...
Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.
A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...
承上启下:
To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...
A study of ... will make this point clear
让步:
Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...
I do not deny that A has its own merits.
结尾:
From what has been discussed above, we may safely drawthe conclusion that...
In summary, it is wiser...
In short...